Tuesday, September 2, 2008

another poem...

alright guys, i'll probably post my weekly assignments for ENG 411. It is an advanced creative writing workshop. this poem was supposed to include three body parts... however the poet interprets... i thought i was clever with the three body stanzas... anyways, here it is...

Bodies in the Desert

It was more a swivel
than a bobble-head.

Strolling down sun-splashed
Palm Walk, artificially-bronzed-
breasts, bounce around
in the poor boy’s polarized
reflective sun glasses.

He slips by, under
the radar. Sweating.
Swamp assed.
Making his way
to the next class.

1 comment:

Alex said...

I'd definitely feel 'cooler' without the swamp ass, gamekiller.